Peer Review #1

Grace demonstrates a great interest in her first encounter assignment. She obviously did an abundance of research before she wrote her review of the Mandalay restaurant. Grace is very detailed in her description in her review and gives great background information and an excellent introduction into the cuisine type. I particularly enjoyed her first opinion of the restaurant when she first enters and is warmly greeted by the manager. This displays Grace’s efforts to make her restaurant visit not only about the food, but the experience in its entirety. I thought her experience and encounter was very authentic and valid because she tried several entrees similar to a professional restaurant. In the review, Grace slips in facts about the Burmese cuisine including that 75% of their diet consists of rice; these facts made her experience engaging and interesting to read.

This post is in response to my first Peer Review.